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Critique By: Trina Lavell Davis
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I agree, but she's very pretty

Critique By: Mary Durante Youtt
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Both the model and the background have the same emphasis and tends to look like a snapshot. Her stance doesn't look like she is comfortable, She looks stiff.
Try a more relaxed pose and maybe sitting on those stairs, shooting a model from an upward position will add length to legs