11 past 4

11 past 4  by Luke Godly
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Posted by: Luke Godly

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Critique By: Mary Durante Youtt
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and the alarm is set for 6:45... I hate when that happens.

I like the triangle of light and how it frames the clock but I wonder how it would look if the shadows were opened up a little more. Could be better... or not.


Reply By: Luke Godly
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Hiya. Thanks for your feedback. I'll have a play around with the image and try out your idea with the shadows. I'll post up whatever I come up with.